Wrestling with the Draft

   For this weeks assignment we had to get to different colored markers and sit down with our paper in front of us and mark it up. One of the colored markers represented my voice and the other marker represented other voices in my paper such as facts or quotes I found. Once we have the markers we had to mark our voice with one color and the other voices with another. The point of this assignment was to help us see who's voice was stronger in our paper. The first page that I did consisted of more of my source voice then did my own voice. Second page I did was half my voice and half my sources voice. The third and final page that I did consisted all most entirely of my own voice and a small portion of my sources voice.